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@@ -5,12 +5,23 @@ Poetry is one of the ways that people use the words and sounds of their language
 #### In poetry we commonly find:
 
 * many figures of speech such as [Apostrophe](../figs-apostrophe/01.md)
-* parallel lines (See [Parallelism](../figs-parallelism/01.md))
-* repetition of some or all of a line
+* arrangements of clauses into particular patterns such as:
+    * parallel lines (See [Parallelism](../figs-parallelism/01.md))
+    * acrostics (beginning lines with successive letters of the alphabet)
+    * chiasms (in which the first line relates to the last line, the second to the next-to-last line, etc.):
+> You should not give what is holy to the dogs, 
+>
+>> and should not throw your pearls in front of the pigs. 
+>>
+>> Otherwise they will trample them under their feet, 
+>
+> and having turned, they might tear you to pieces. (Matt 7:6 ULT)
+
+* repetition of some or all of a line:
 
 > Praise him, all his angels; praise him, all his hosts. Praise him, sun and moon; praise him, all you shining stars. (Psalm 148:2-3 ULT)
 
-* lines of similar length.
+* lines of similar length:
 
 > Listen to my call to you,
 >
@@ -20,21 +31,21 @@ Poetry is one of the ways that people use the words and sounds of their language
 >
 > for it is to you that I pray. (Psalm 5:1-2 ULT)
 
-* the same sound used at the end or at the beginning of two or more lines
+* the same sound used at the end or at the beginning of two or more lines:
 
 > “Twinkle, twinkle little **star**. How I wonder what you **are**.” (from an English rhyme)
 
-* the same sound repeated many times
+* the same sound repeated many times:
 
 > “Peter, Peter, pumpkin eater” (from an English rhyme)
->
-> We also find:
->
-> * old words and expressions
-> * dramatic imagery
-> * different use of grammar — including:
->     * incomplete sentences
->     * lack of connective words
+
+ We also find:
+
+ * old words and expressions
+ * dramatic imagery
+ * different use of grammar — including:
+     * incomplete sentences
+     * lack of connective words
 
 #### Some places to look for poetry in your language
 
@@ -50,6 +61,7 @@ Elegant or fancy speech is similar to poetry in that it uses beautiful language,
 #### Reasons This Is a Translation Issue:
 
 * Different languages use poetry for different things. If a poetic form would not communicate the same meaning in your language, you may need to write it without the poetry.
+* Different languages use different poetic devices. A poetic device that conveys elegance or emotion in a biblical language may be confusing or misunderstood in another language.
 * In some languages, using poetry for a particular part of the Bible would make it much more powerful.
 
 ### Examples From the Bible