diff --git a/translate/translate-names/01.md b/translate/translate-names/01.md index 87d699e..8fc56ca 100644 --- a/translate/translate-names/01.md +++ b/translate/translate-names/01.md @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ Readers may not know that the names Saul and Paul refer to the same person. (2) If readers need to understand the meaning of a name in order to understand what is said about it, copy the name and tell about its meaning either in the text or in a footnote. > **She named him Moses and said, “Because I drew him from the water.”** (Exodus 2:11 ULT) ->> She named him Moses, which sounds like ‘drawn out,’ and said, “Because I drew him from the water.” +>> She named him Moses (which sounds like ‘drawn out'), and said, “Because I drew him from the water.” (3) Or if readers need to understand the meaning of a name in order to understand what is said about it, and that name is used only once, translate the meaning of the name instead of copying the name. @@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ Readers may not know that the names Saul and Paul refer to the same person. The footnote would look like: ->> [1] Most versions say Saul here, but most of the time in the Bible he is called Paul. +>> [1] Most versions say Saul here, but most of the time in the Bible he is called Paul. -Then later in the story, you could translate this way. +Then later in the story, you could translate this way: > **But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit;** (Acts 13:9) >> But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit; @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ The footnote would look like: >> [1] This is the same man who is called Paul beginning in Acts 13. -Then later in the story, you could translate this way. +Then later in the story, you could translate this way: > **But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit;** (Acts 13:9) >> But Saul, who is also called Paul, was filled with the Holy Spirit; @@ -105,5 +105,5 @@ Then after the story has explained the name change, you could translate this way The footnote would look like: ->> [1] This is the man that was called Saul before Acts 13. +>> [1] This is the same man who was called Saul before Acts 13.