Fixed ch intros with "indent".

2017-09-29 09:02:31 -04:00 · 2017-09-29 09:02:31 -04:00 · 250b43eac8
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--- a/ecc/10/intro.md
+++ b/ecc/10/intro.md
@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 #### Structure and formatting ####
-Some translations prefer to set apart extended quotations, prayers, or songs. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of chapter 10, which is an extended quotation. Some lines are indented twice to further set them apart. 
+Some translations indent each line of poetry to make it easier to read. The ULB does this with the poetry in all of chapter 10.
 #### Special concepts in this chapter ####
--- a/ecc/11/intro.md
+++ b/ecc/11/intro.md
@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 #### Structure and formatting ####
-Some translations prefer to set apart extended quotations, prayers, or songs. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of chapter 10, which is an extended quotation. Some lines are indented twice to further set them apart. 
+Some translations indent each line of poetry to make it easier to read. The ULB does this with the poetry in all of chapter 11.
 #### Special concepts in this chapter ####
--- a/ecc/12/intro.md
+++ b/ecc/12/intro.md
@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 #### Structure and formatting ####
-Some translations prefer to set apart extended quotations, prayers, or songs. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of chapter 10, which is an extended quotation. Some lines are indented twice to further set them apart. 
+Some translations indent each line of poetry to make it easier to read. The ULB does this with the poetry in 12:1-7 and 12:13-14.
 #### Special concepts in this chapter ####
--- a/eph/04/intro.md
+++ b/eph/04/intro.md
@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 #### Structure and formatting ####
-Some translations prefer to set apart quotations of the Old Testament. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of 4:8, which is a quotation from the Old Testament.
+Some translations indent each line of poetry to make it easier to read. The ULB does this with the poetry that is quoted from the Old Testament in 4:8.
 #### Special concepts in this chapter ####
--- a/eph/05/intro.md
+++ b/eph/05/intro.md
@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 #### Structure and formatting ####
-Some translations prefer to set apart quotations of the Old Testament. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of 5:14, which is a reference to the Old Testament.
+Some translations indent each line of poetry to make it easier to read. The ULB does this with the poetry in 5:14.
 #### Special concepts in this chapter ####
--- a/exo/15/intro.md
+++ b/exo/15/intro.md
@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 #### Structure and formatting ####
-Some translations prefer to set apart extended quotations, prayers or songs. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of 15:1-18, 21, which are songs. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]])
+Some translations indent each line of poetry to make it easier to read. The ULB does this with the poetic songs in 15:1-18 and 15:21. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]])
 #### Special concepts in this chapter ####
--- a/exo/32/intro.md
+++ b/exo/32/intro.md
@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 #### Structure and formatting ####
-The events of this chapter occur while Moses spoke with God and therefore happen at the same time as chapters 20-31.
+The events of this chapter occur while Moses spoke with God and therefore happen at the same time as the events in chapters 20-31.
-Some translations prefer to set apart extended quotations, prayers or songs. The ULB and many other English translations indent the lines of 32:18, which is an important quotation.
+Some translations indent each line of poetry to make it easier to read. The ULB does this with the poetry in 32:18.
 #### Special concepts in this chapter ####