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Co-authored-by: Grant_Ailie <grant_ailie@noreply.door43.org>
Reviewed-on: https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_tq/pulls/53

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-# What did Memucan say the noble women of Persia and Media would do before the end of that very day?
+# What did Memukan say the women of Persia and Media would do?
 
-For the matter of the queen will go out to all the women, in order to make their husbands despised in their eyes when they say, ‘The king Ahasuerus said to bring Vashti the queen before him, but she did not come.’ Now this day, the noblewomen of Persia and Media who have heard the matter of the queen will speak to all the officials of the king; and there will be contempt and wrath enough!.
+Memukan said that what the queen did would become known to all the women in the kingdom of king Ahasuerus and that when the women of the kingdom found out what the queen had done they would despise their own husbands and say, "King Ahasuerus commanded his servants to bring Queen Vashti to him, but she did not come!"  

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 # What did the king’s young men recommend?
 
-The king’s young men recommended that they seek for the king young women who are virgins and pleasing of appearance.
+The king’s young men recommended that they seek for the king young women who were virgins and pleasing of appearance.

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 # When would a girl return to the king?
 
-She would not go to the king again, unless the king had delighted in her and she was called by name.
+She would not go to the king again unless the king had delighted in her and she was called by name.

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-# Who knelt and prostrated themselves to Haman?
+# Who were kneeling and prostrating themselves to Haman?
 
-Then all the servants of the king who were at the gate of the king were bowing down and prostrating themselves to Haman.
+All the servants of the king were at the gate of the king and were bowing down and prostrating themselves to Haman.

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 # What happened if any man or woman went to the king inside the inner courtyard without being summoned?
 
-For any man or woman who goes to the king, to the inner court, who has not been called, his law is one: to cause to die; apart from when the king holds out to him the scepter of gold, then he will live.
+The law was that any man or woman would die who went to the king inside the inner court without first being called unless the king held out to him or her the scepter of gold, in which case the person was allowed to live.

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 # What did Mordecai say would happen if Esther remained silent at that time?
 
-For if you indeed remain silent at this time, relief and deliverance will arise for the Jews from another place, but you and the house of your father will perish.
+For if you, indeed, remain silent at this time, relief and deliverance will arise for the Jews from another place, but you and the house of your father will perish.

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 # Where was the inner courtyard of the king’s palace?
 
-The inner courtyard of the king’s palace was pposite to the house of the king.
+The inner courtyard of the king’s palace was opposite to the house of the king.

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 # What did Haman recount to his family?
 
-Then Haman recounted to them the glory of his wealth, and the multitude of his sons, and all about how the king had made him great and how he had lifted him over the officials and administrators of the king.
+Then Haman recounted to them the glory of his wealth and the multitude of his sons and all about how the king had made him great and how he had lifted him over the officials and administrators of the king.

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-# What had been done to give honor or recognition to Mordecai for telling the king about Bigthan and Teresh?
+# What was found written in the book of records that was read to the king?
 
-Not a thing had been done with him.
+It was found written that Mordecai had reported that Bigthana and Teresh, two of the king’s eunuchs who guarded the door, had conspired to kill the King.

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-# What did Haman do when the king got up in a rage from the wine-drinking?
+# What did Haman do when the king got up in a rage from the banquet of wine?
 
-But Haman remained in order to seek for his life from Esther the queen.
+Haman remained in order to beg for his life from Esther the queen.

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 # Where did the king say to hang Haman?
 
-The king said to hang Haman on the tree that Haman made for Mordecai, which was standing at the house of Haman fifty cubits high.
+The king said to hang Haman on the tree that Haman made for Mordecai, which was standing at the house of Haman 50 cubits high.

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-# What letters did Haman write?
+# What letters had Haman written?
 
-Haman wrote letters to destroy the Jews who are in all of the provinces of the king.
+Haman had written letters to destroy the Jews who were in all of the provinces of the king.

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 # Why did Esther need to write another decree for the Jews in the name of the king?
 
-So you write for the Jews as is good in your eyes in the name of the king, and seal it with the signet ring of the king. For there is none to take back a writing that has been written in the name of the king and has been sealed with the signet ring of the king.
+Esther needed to write another decree because there was none to take back a writing that had been written in the name of the king and had been sealed with the signet ring of the king.

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 # What did the king give the Jews permission to do?
 
-The king gave to the Jews who were in every city by city: to gather and to stand for their life, to annihiliate, and to slaughter, and to destroy any strength of a people or province that would attack them, children and women, and plunder their spoil.
+The king gave the Jews in every city the legal right to gather together and defend their lives, to annihiliate and to slaughter and to destroy any group of a people or province that would attack them including their women and children and women, and to plunder their spoil.

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 # Why did many from among the variety of peoples of the land become Jews?
 
-And many from the peoples of the land became Jews, because dread of the Jews had fallen upon them.
+Many from the peoples of the land became Jews because dread of the Jews had fallen upon them.

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 # What did the Jews do to their enemies?
 
-And the Jews struck to all their enemies a strike of sword, and slaughter, and destruction; and they did to those who hated them according to their pleasure.
+And the Jews struck to all their enemies a strike of sword and slaughter and destruction, and they did to those who hated them according to their pleasure.

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 # How many men did the Jews kill on the fourteenth day of the month Adar?
 
-So the Jews who were in Susa assembled themselves also on the fourteenth day of the month of Adar, and they killed three hundred men in Susa.
+So the Jews who were in Susa assembled themselves also on day 14 of the month of Adar, and they killed 300 men in Susa.

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-# Why do the Jews of the villages observe the fourteenth day of the month Adar as a day of gladness and feasting?
+# What did the rest of the Jews who were in the provinces of the king do on the fourteenth day of the month Adar?
 
-On the thirteenth day of the month of Adar, then they rested. On the fourteenth of it, then they made it a day of feasting and rejoicing.
+On the fourteenth day of the month of Adar they made it a day of feasting and rejoicing.

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-# Why do the Jews of the villages observe the fourteenth day of the month Adar as a day of gladness and feasting?
+# What do the Jews of the open country, the ones who dwell in the cities of the open areas, do on day 14 of the month of Adar?
 
-Therefore, the Jews, the ones of the open country, the ones who dwell in the cities of the open areas, make the fourteenth day of the month of Adar for rejoicing and for feasting and a good day.
+They make day 14 of the month of Adar a day for rejoicing and for feasting and a good day, and for the sending of gifts, a man to his friend.

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 # How often did Mordecai obligate the Jews to keep the fourteenth and the fifteenth day of Adar?
 
-And he sent letters to all the Jews who were in all the provinces of the king Ahasuerus, the near ones and the far ones, to set up for them to be making the fourteenth day of the month of Adar and the fifteenth day of it, every year by year.
+Mordecai obligated the Jews to keep the fourteenth and fifteenth days of Adar “every year by year,” meaning every single year.

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 # How often did Mordecai obligate the Jews to keep the fourteenth and the fifteenth day of Adar?
 
-And he sent letters to all the Jews who were in all the provinces of the king Ahasuerus, the near ones and the far ones, 21 to set up for them to be making the fourteenth day of the month of Adar and the fifteenth day of it, every year by year.
+Mordecai obligated the Jews to keep the fourteenth and fifteenth days of Adar “every year by year,” meaning every single year.