diff --git a/deu/18/06.md b/deu/18/06.md index dc8bc792db..ee6c42b1ba 100644 --- a/deu/18/06.md +++ b/deu/18/06.md @@ -1,7 +1,3 @@ -# from any of your gates out of all Israel where he is living - -The word "gates" here is a metonym for the towns that the gates protect. Alternate translation: "from where he is living in any of your towns anywhere in Israel" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]]) - # desires with all his soul This is an idiom. Alternate translation: "strongly desires" or "really wants" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]]) diff --git a/deu/21/09.md b/deu/21/09.md index c028a1e5eb..dcd78af85e 100644 --- a/deu/21/09.md +++ b/deu/21/09.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# you will put away the innocent blood from your midst +# you will completely remove the innocent blood from your midst "you will not be guilty any more of killing an innocent person" diff --git a/deu/22/14.md b/deu/22/14.md index 2e422de2a2..a9b32b6e23 100644 --- a/deu/22/14.md +++ b/deu/22/14.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# then accuses her of shameful things +# then accuses her of shameful deeds -"then accuses her of having slept with someone before she was married" +"then accuses her of having had sexual relations with someone else before she was married" # puts a bad reputation on her diff --git a/deu/22/23.md b/deu/22/23.md index f12d34c94e..ab06a36d4d 100644 --- a/deu/22/23.md +++ b/deu/22/23.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Moses speaks to the Israelites as if they were one man, so the word "you" is singular. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-you]]) -# engaged to a man +# betrothed to a man "who is promised to marry a man" diff --git a/deu/22/25.md b/deu/22/25.md index a2ae6b71df..27d8a57f32 100644 --- a/deu/22/25.md +++ b/deu/22/25.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# the engaged girl +# the betrothed girl a girl whose parents have agreed to let her marry a certain man, but she has not married him yet diff --git a/deu/22/28.md b/deu/22/28.md index 140fb2855b..c69f27186f 100644 --- a/deu/22/28.md +++ b/deu/22/28.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# but who is not engaged +# but who is not betrothed "but whose parents have not promised another man that she will marry him" diff --git a/deu/23/10.md b/deu/23/10.md index 941df8c7e2..52a45c65ef 100644 --- a/deu/23/10.md +++ b/deu/23/10.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# any man who is unclean because of what happened to him at night +# any man who is unclean because of a nighttime accident This is a polite way of saying that he had an emission of semen. Alternate translation: "any man who is unclean because he had an emission of semen while he was asleep" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-euphemism]]) diff --git a/deu/24/01.md b/deu/24/01.md index 5484af8f81..9bf2dd82b1 100644 --- a/deu/24/01.md +++ b/deu/24/01.md @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ The phrases "takes a wife" and "marries her" mean the same thing. Alternate tran Here the "eyes" represent the whole person. Alternate translation: "if he decides that he does not like her" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]]) -# because he has found some unsuitable thing in her +# because he has found something shameful about her -"because for some reason he has decided that he does not want to keep her" +The word translated "shameful" here implies sexual immorality. # he must write her a certificate of divorce diff --git a/deu/24/04.md b/deu/24/04.md index 43908e243e..1338d36a0d 100644 --- a/deu/24/04.md +++ b/deu/24/04.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# after she has become impure +# after she has become unclean The full meaning of this statement can be made explicit. Alternate translation: "after she has become unclean by the divorce and remarriage to another man" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) diff --git a/deu/25/02.md b/deu/25/02.md index dff5d4cffb..ad3bf7489f 100644 --- a/deu/25/02.md +++ b/deu/25/02.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "If the judge orders t This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "he will watch them beat him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) -# with the ordered number of blows, as was his crime +# with the ordered number of blows, according to his wickedness "the number of times he has ordered because of the bad deed he did" diff --git a/deu/26/02.md b/deu/26/02.md index 15fd32d5bf..5f841627a3 100644 --- a/deu/26/02.md +++ b/deu/26/02.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# some of the first of all the harvest +# some of the first of all the crops -"some of the first fruits of the harvest" or "some of the first crops of the harvest." This "first" is the ordinal number for one. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-ordinal]]) +"some of the first fruits of the crops" or "some of the first crops of the harvest." This "first" is the ordinal number for one. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-ordinal]]) # make a dwelling for his name