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# will not awaken or arouse love until she pleases
Here "love" is spoken of as if it were a person asleep that does not want to be awakened. This is a metaphor that represents the man and woman who do not want to be disturbed until they are finished making love. Alternate translation: "will not disturb us until we have finished making love" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
Here "love" is spoken of as if it were a person asleep that does not want to be awakened. This is a metaphor that represents the man and woman who do not want to be disturbed until they are finished making love. See how you translated these words in [Song of Songs 2:7](../02.07.md). Alternate translation: "will not disturb us until we have finished making love" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
# will not awaken or arouse

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# I was so happy that I felt I was riding in the chariot of a prince
# I did not know when my soul placed me
The man uses this image to express how happy he is. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]])
Or "before I knew it, my soul placed me"
# my soul
Or "my desire." She was on the chariots because she wanted to be.
# placed me on
Or "made me like"
# on the chariots of my noble people
Or "on the chariots of Ammi-nadib"

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The man wants to embrace the woman. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
# May your breasts be like clusters of grapes
# May your breasts be like clusters of the vine
The man wants to touch her breasts. Clusters of grapes are round and soft. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]])
# the vine
This phrase is a metonym for the grapes that grow on the vine. Alternate translation: "grapes" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
# may the fragrance of your nose be like apricots
The word "nose" is a metonym for the breath coming out of the nose. Alternate translation: "may the breath coming from your nose smell sweet like apricots" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]])

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"young women of Jerusalem." These young women could not hear her and were not present, but the woman speaks as if they were present and could hear her. See how you translated this in [Song of Songs 2:7](../02/07.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-apostrophe]])
# that you will ... until it pleases
# will not awaken or arouse love until she pleases
See how you translated this in [Song of Songs 2:7](../02/07.md).
Here "love" is spoken of as if it were a person asleep that does not want to be awakened. This is a metaphor that represents the man and woman who do not want to be disturbed until they are finished making love. See how you translated these words in [Song of Songs 2:7](../02.07.md). Alternate translation: "will not disturb us until we have finished making love" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])