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-# do not lose sight of them
+# do not let these depart from your eyes ... wisdom ... discretion
 
-The writer speaks of not forgetting something as if it were always being able to see it. Alternate translation: "do not forget them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+The word "eyes" is a metonym for what the eyes see, and "wisdom" and "discretion" are spoken of as if they were animals able to escape or wander away. Alternate translation: "do not let these out of your sight ... wisdom ... discretion" or "never forget ... wisdom ... discretion" or "always remember ... wisdom ... discretion" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])