diff --git a/dan/11/31.md b/dan/11/31.md index 9eeb8dea62..43b631d443 100644 --- a/dan/11/31.md +++ b/dan/11/31.md @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ "the sanctuary that the people use as a fortress" -# They will take away the regular burnt offering +# They will put an end to the regular burnt offering -Taking away the offering represents preventing people from offering it. Alternate translation: "They will stop the priests from presenting the regular burnt offering" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) +They will prevent people from offering it. Alternate translation: "They will stop the priests from presenting the regular burnt offering" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) # the abomination that causes desolation diff --git a/dan/12/11.md b/dan/12/11.md index 11782e2920..8f0d84f158 100644 --- a/dan/12/11.md +++ b/dan/12/11.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# the regular burnt offering is ... is set up +# an end is put to the regular burnt offering and the abomination that causes complete desolation is set up -The king of the north is the one who stops the temple sacrifices. Alternate translation: "the king of the North takes away the regular burnt offering and sets up the abomination that causes complete desolation" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) +The king of the north is the one who stops the temple sacrifices. Alternate translation: "the king of the North puts an end to the regular burnt offering and sets up the abomination that causes complete desolation" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) # the abomination that causes complete desolation