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 # Connecting Statement:
 
-In the town of Capernaum on the Sabbath Jesus teaches in the synagogue. He sends a demon out of a man, which amazes the people in all the nearby area around Galilee.
+Jesus teaches in the synagogue of the town of Capernaum on the Sabbath. By sending a demon out of a man he amazes the people in all the nearby area around Galilee.
 
 # came into Capernaum