From 5372a46881f3df4ab2be61b6bff59ca87eaef7e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Henry Whitney Date: Fri, 22 Nov 2019 13:48:19 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] PDF Genesis 1-20 --- gen/02/04.md | 4 ++-- gen/03/07.md | 4 ++-- gen/03/16.md | 2 +- gen/04/23.md | 2 +- gen/06/09.md | 4 ---- gen/07/03.md | 2 +- gen/09/20.md | 2 +- gen/10/08.md | 2 +- gen/14/15.md | 8 ++++++-- gen/19/15.md | 2 +- gen/19/32.md | 2 +- gen/19/34.md | 7 ++++--- gen/19/36.md | 2 +- gen/20/09.md | 2 +- gen/20/18.md | 4 ++-- gen/25/19.md | 4 ++-- gen/37/02.md | 4 ---- lev/14/54.md | 4 ++-- lev/20/27.md | 4 ---- nam/02/09.md | 4 ++-- num/24/05.md | 4 ++-- pro/11/30.md | 4 ++-- zec/03/04.md | 4 ++-- 23 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 44 deletions(-) diff --git a/gen/02/04.md b/gen/02/04.md index b2e36e6d0c..91f5785f1f 100644 --- a/gen/02/04.md +++ b/gen/02/04.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ The rest of Genesis 2 tells about how God created people on the sixth day. -# These were the events concerning the heavens and the earth +# This is the account of the heavens and the earth -"This is the account of the heavens and the earth" or "This is the story about the heavens and the earth." Possible meanings are 1) it is a summary of the events described in Genesis 1:1-2:3 or 2) it introduces the events described in Genesis 2. If possible, translate this so that people can understood it either way. +"This is the story about the heavens and the earth." Possible meanings are 1) it is a summary of the events described in Genesis 1:1-2:3 or 2) it introduces the events to follow. If possible, translate this so that people can understood it either way. # they were created diff --git a/gen/03/07.md b/gen/03/07.md index 25be1eea5f..5d8bcec104 100644 --- a/gen/03/07.md +++ b/gen/03/07.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ put together, probably using vines as thread If people do not know what fig leaves are like, this can be translated as "large leaves from a fig tree" or simply "large leaves." -# made coverings for themselves +# made coverings for their loins -They did this because they were ashamed. This implicit information can be made explicit if needed as in the UDB. Alternate translation: "clothed themselves with them because they were ashamed" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) +They did this because they were ashamed. This implicit information can be made explicit. Alternate translation: "clothed themselves with them because they were ashamed" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) diff --git a/gen/03/16.md b/gen/03/16.md index 8ceb9bd071..9d04867a8a 100644 --- a/gen/03/16.md +++ b/gen/03/16.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ "I will make your pain increase much" or "I will make your pain to be very severe" -# in having children +# in childbirth "in giving birth to children" or "when you give birth to children" diff --git a/gen/04/23.md b/gen/04/23.md index 0532614e06..08648cd635 100644 --- a/gen/04/23.md +++ b/gen/04/23.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ See how you translated these women's names in [Genesis 4:19](../04/19.md). -# listen to my voice ... listen to what I say +# listen to my voice ... listen to my words Lamech said the same thing twice for emphasis. His voice is a synecdoche for his whole person. Alternate translation: "listen carefully to me" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]]) diff --git a/gen/06/09.md b/gen/06/09.md index e7a07fef0e..8559b43c04 100644 --- a/gen/06/09.md +++ b/gen/06/09.md @@ -2,10 +2,6 @@ This begins the story of Noah, which continues into chapter 9. -# These were the events concerning Noah - -"This is the account of Noah" - # walked with God See how you translated this in [Genesis 5:21](../05/21.md). diff --git a/gen/07/03.md b/gen/07/03.md index 2a43248eae..eb3e571e52 100644 --- a/gen/07/03.md +++ b/gen/07/03.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# to preserve their offspring +# to keep their offspring alive "so that they will have offspring that will live" or "so that, after the flood, animals will continue to live" diff --git a/gen/09/20.md b/gen/09/20.md index 8da479953d..cada5c534c 100644 --- a/gen/09/20.md +++ b/gen/09/20.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# farmer +# man of the soil person who raises plants for food diff --git a/gen/10/08.md b/gen/10/08.md index fee4586a7e..45d1e3e16f 100644 --- a/gen/10/08.md +++ b/gen/10/08.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# conqueror +# mighty one Possible meanings are 1) "mighty warrior" or 2) "mighty man" or 3) "powerful ruler." diff --git a/gen/14/15.md b/gen/14/15.md index e5eb64acd0..777b619fee 100644 --- a/gen/14/15.md +++ b/gen/14/15.md @@ -1,4 +1,8 @@ -# He divided his men against them at night and attacked them +# He divided his men against them at night, he and his servants, and -This probably refers to a battle strategy. "Abram divided the men into several groups, and they attacked their enemies from various directions" +This elliptical statement probably refers to a battle strategy. Alternate translation: "At night Abram divided his men—he attacked them from one side and his servants attacked them from another—and" + +# servants + +"men of war." They served him by fighting for him. diff --git a/gen/19/15.md b/gen/19/15.md index c83d868e85..7d207a7686 100644 --- a/gen/19/15.md +++ b/gen/19/15.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# When the morning dawned +# When dawn came "Just before the sun came up" diff --git a/gen/19/32.md b/gen/19/32.md index 7215c20fbe..2713aa191b 100644 --- a/gen/19/32.md +++ b/gen/19/32.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ It can be made explicit that their goal was to get him drunk. Alternate translat To "lie with" someone is a euphemism for having sexual relations with that person. Alternate translation: "we will have sexual relations with him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-euphemism]]) -# so that we may extend our father's line +# so that we may keep our family line alive through our father This speaks about giving Lot descendants as if his family were a line that they are making longer. Alternate translation: "so that we can bear children who will be our father's descendants" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) diff --git a/gen/19/34.md b/gen/19/34.md index 3bbf62eb38..a65bd050dd 100644 --- a/gen/19/34.md +++ b/gen/19/34.md @@ -1,7 +1,8 @@ # I lay last night with my father ... lie with him -To "lay with" or "lie with" someone is a euphemism for having sexual relations with that person. Alternate translation: "I had sexual relations with my father ... have sexual relations with him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-euphemism]]) -# Let us make him drink wine ... father's line +The phrase "lay with" is a euphemism meaning that she had sexual relations with her father. Alternate translation: "I had sexual relations with my father ... have sexual relations with him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-euphemism]]) + +# Let us make him drink wine ... family line See how you translated these phrases in [Genesis 19:32](./32.md). @@ -9,7 +10,7 @@ See how you translated these phrases in [Genesis 19:32](./32.md). It can be made explicit that their goal was to get him drunk. Alternate translation: "drink wine until he gets drunk" or "get drunk with wine" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) -# so that we may extend our father's line +# so that we may keep our family line alive through our father This speaks about giving Lot descendants as if his family were a line that they are making longer. Alternate translation: "so that we can bear children who will be our father's descendants" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) diff --git a/gen/19/36.md b/gen/19/36.md index 8e94e49c29..a7fb0b9ec2 100644 --- a/gen/19/36.md +++ b/gen/19/36.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# were pregnant by their father +# conceived by their father "became pregnant by their father" or "conceived children with their father" diff --git a/gen/20/09.md b/gen/20/09.md index ea65f929a3..a21ee652ff 100644 --- a/gen/20/09.md +++ b/gen/20/09.md @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ To cause someone to be guilty of sinning is spoken of as if "sin" was a thing th Here "kingdom" stands for the people. Alternate translation: "on the people of my kingdom" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]]) -# You have done to me that which ought not to be done +# You have done to me deeds that ought not to be done "You should not have done this to me" diff --git a/gen/20/18.md b/gen/20/18.md index 4c5790fc4d..59ac5e2c86 100644 --- a/gen/20/18.md +++ b/gen/20/18.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# completely infertile +# closed all the wombs of the household of Abimelek -"totally unable to have children" +"made all the women of Abimelek's household totally unable to have children" # because of Sarah, Abraham's wife diff --git a/gen/25/19.md b/gen/25/19.md index c0d2a7ed87..d778b3d918 100644 --- a/gen/25/19.md +++ b/gen/25/19.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# These were the events concerning Isaac, Abraham's son +# General Information: -This sentence introduces the account of Isaac's descendants in Genesis 25:19-35:29. Alternate translation: "This is the account of the descendants of Isaac, Abraham's son" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) +This page has intentionally been left blank. diff --git a/gen/37/02.md b/gen/37/02.md index 51a1598b49..9a7b92754e 100644 --- a/gen/37/02.md +++ b/gen/37/02.md @@ -1,7 +1,3 @@ -# These were the events concerning Jacob - -This sentence introduces the account of Jacob's children in Genesis 37:1-50:26. Here "Jacob" refers to his whole family. Alternate translation: "This is the account of Jacob's family" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]]) - # seventeen years old "17 years old" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-numbers]]) diff --git a/lev/14/54.md b/lev/14/54.md index 580f24e884..2312339d94 100644 --- a/lev/14/54.md +++ b/lev/14/54.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# infectious skin disease +# leprosy -See how you translated these words in [Leviticus 13:3](../13/03.md). +See how you translated this word in [Leviticus 13:3](../13/03.md). diff --git a/lev/20/27.md b/lev/20/27.md index 947e879c1c..adeb71a27d 100644 --- a/lev/20/27.md +++ b/lev/20/27.md @@ -1,7 +1,3 @@ -# talks with - -"attempts to communicate with" - # must certainly be put to death This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "they must certainly put to death" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]]) diff --git a/nam/02/09.md b/nam/02/09.md index 98328b6a9b..23033a2e21 100644 --- a/nam/02/09.md +++ b/nam/02/09.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Take the silver plunder ... Nineveh's beautiful things +# Take the silver plunder ... Nineveh's desirable things It is not clear who is speaking here. This may be an apostrophe in which Nahum gives directions to the attackers, or the attackers may be speaking and giving directions to one another. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-apostrophe]]) @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ The word "plunder" means things stolen by force, usually in war. Alternate trans The words "no end" are an exaggeration to express that there is a great amount of something. Alternate translation: "there is a very great amount of treasure, of the splendor" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-hyperbole]]) -# to the splendor of all Nineveh's beautiful things +# to the splendor of all Nineveh's desirable things This phrase refers to the silver, gold, and other treasures in Nineveh. The verb may be supplied from the previous phrase. Alternate translation: "there is no end to the splendor of all Nineveh's beautiful treasures" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) diff --git a/num/24/05.md b/num/24/05.md index 9f50104c85..d778b3d918 100644 --- a/num/24/05.md +++ b/num/24/05.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# How beautiful are your tents, Jacob, the place where you live, Israel! +# General Information: -Both of these statements mean the same thing. They emphasize the Israelite camp was beautiful to Balaam. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]]) +This page has intentionally been left blank. diff --git a/pro/11/30.md b/pro/11/30.md index 6491e5bda3..c35828a42a 100644 --- a/pro/11/30.md +++ b/pro/11/30.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# The righteous person will be like a tree of life +# The fruit of the righteous is a tree of life -A person who does what is right is compared to a tree that produces life as its fruit. Alternate translation: "Those who do right will bring life to themselves and others" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-simile]]) +The word "fruit" here is a metonym for the tree that produces the fruit, and the tree is a metaphor for a person who does what is right. Alternate translation: "Those who do right will bring life to themselves and others" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) # tree of life diff --git a/zec/03/04.md b/zec/03/04.md index f24c0754c3..00f0459f40 100644 --- a/zec/03/04.md +++ b/zec/03/04.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ The word "him" refers to the angel. The phrase refers to other angels who were p Since Joshua's garments were symbolic of his sinfulness, by removing his garments, the angel removed Joshua's iniquity. Causing iniquity to pass from him is an idiom that means that he had removed Joshua's iniquity. Alternate translation: "I have removed your iniquity from you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]]) -# dress you in fine clothing +# dress you in official robes -Here fine clothing symbolizes righteousness. If your language has a word for clothes that people wear only for special occasions, you might want to use it here. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/writing-symlanguage]]) +Here the phrase "official robes" is a metaphor for righteousness. If your language has a word for clothes that people wear only for special occasions, you might want to use it here. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/writing-symlanguage]])