diff --git a/ezr/08/03.md b/ezr/08/03.md index 99187f286f..b168ae86db 100644 --- a/ezr/08/03.md +++ b/ezr/08/03.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ See how you translated this man's name in [Ezra 2:3](../02/03.md). -# with him there were 150 males listed in the record of his genealogy +# with him there were 150 males listed in his genealogy -"with Zechariah there were 150 males listed in the record of his genealogy" +"with Zechariah there were 150 males listed in his genealogy" # 150 males diff --git a/neh/07/02.md b/neh/07/02.md index b2b7d9903d..6a1be10b6f 100644 --- a/neh/07/02.md +++ b/neh/07/02.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]]) -# I gave my brother Hanani charge +# I put my brother Hanani in charge "I gave the order for my brother Hanani to be the manager" diff --git a/neh/07/64.md b/neh/07/64.md index 25df29941c..b1e9f7ce0c 100644 --- a/neh/07/64.md +++ b/neh/07/64.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ -# These sought their records among those enrolled by their genealogy +# These sought their records among those enrolled by their families -"They sought their written genealogical records" or "They searched their written genealogical records" +"They searched their written genealogical records" # These sought diff --git a/neh/08/06.md b/neh/08/06.md index db76415b22..c291de689f 100644 --- a/neh/08/06.md +++ b/neh/08/06.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Ezra gave thanks to Yahweh +# Ezra blessed Yahweh -The abstract noun "thanks" can be translated as a verb. Alternate translation: "Ezra thanked Yahweh" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]]) +Ezra thanked Yahweh or Ezra praised Yahweh or Ezra said that he desired that Yahweh be pleased with Ezra and Ezra's people.