diff --git a/2ch/28/12.md b/2ch/28/12.md index 4ea1d329f9..33df970277 100644 --- a/2ch/28/12.md +++ b/2ch/28/12.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Azariah son of Jehohanan, Berechiah son of Meshillemoth, Jehizkiah son of Shallum, and Amasa son of Hadlai +# Azariah son of Jehohanan, Berekiah son of Meshillemoth, Jehizkiah son of Shallum, and Amasa son of Hadlai These are all names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names]]) diff --git a/deu/26/02.md b/deu/26/02.md index 5f841627a3..63360f6120 100644 --- a/deu/26/02.md +++ b/deu/26/02.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# some of the first of all the crops +# some of the first of all the produce "some of the first fruits of the crops" or "some of the first crops of the harvest." This "first" is the ordinal number for one. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-ordinal]]) diff --git a/deu/26/10.md b/deu/26/10.md index c22656e1ea..9280a1e692 100644 --- a/deu/26/10.md +++ b/deu/26/10.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Moses continues telling the Israelites what they must say when they bring theire first crops to Yahweh. He speaks to them as if they were one man, so the words "you" and "your" here are singular. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-you]]) -# first of the harvest +# first of the produce "first fruits of the harvest" or "first crops of the harvest" diff --git a/deu/26/13.md b/deu/26/13.md index 07a89a515a..958e3fe585 100644 --- a/deu/26/13.md +++ b/deu/26/13.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# I have brought out of +# I have completely removed from These are the first words of another statement that the Israelite was supposed to say. diff --git a/deu/26/14.md b/deu/26/14.md index c85cef6002..e7b59c66ac 100644 --- a/deu/26/14.md +++ b/deu/26/14.md @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ This continues what the Israelite must say to Yahweh when he gives his tithe to "I have not eaten any of the tithe while I was mourning" -# when I was impure +# when I was unclean -Here "impure" means the person is unclean according to the Law. God does not allow an unclean person to touch the tithe he is giving to God. The full meaning of this statement can be made explicit. Alternate translation: "when I was unclean according to the Law" or "when the law says I cannot touch it" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) +God does not allow an unclean person to touch the tithe he is giving to God. The full meaning of this statement can be made explicit. Alternate translation: "when I was unclean according to the Law" or "when the law says I cannot touch it" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) # I have listened to the voice of Yahweh my God; I have obeyed everything you have commanded me to do diff --git a/deu/28/40.md b/deu/28/40.md index 9761ebb3c1..aab9d45f62 100644 --- a/deu/28/40.md +++ b/deu/28/40.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Moses continues describing God's curses if the people disobey him. He speaks to the Israelites as if they were one man, so the words "you" and "your" here are singular. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-you]]) -# but you will not rub any of the oil on yourself +# but you will not anoint yourself with the oil People would rub olive oil on themselves to make their skin healthy. diff --git a/deu/29/06.md b/deu/29/06.md index e7ed4e9ba7..da5ba1bd6e 100644 --- a/deu/29/06.md +++ b/deu/29/06.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# other alcoholic drinks +# other strong drink -Alcoholic drinks made probably from fermented grains. They were not distilled liquors. +These were alcoholic drinks made probably from fermented grains. They were not distilled liquors. diff --git a/deu/29/18.md b/deu/29/18.md index 8320748aa3..13a7a72b0f 100644 --- a/deu/29/18.md +++ b/deu/29/18.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ Here "heart" refers to the whole person, and "turning away" means to stop obeying. Alternate translation: "who no longer obeys Yahweh our God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]]) -# any root that produces gall and wormwood +# any root that produces poison fruit and wormwood Moses speaks of someone who secretly worships another God as if he were a root, and the evil deeds he does to serve that god, and which he encourages others to do, as a bitter plant that poisons people. Alternate translation: "any person who worships idols and causes others to disobey Yahweh" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) diff --git a/deu/30/01.md b/deu/30/01.md index c1c752784a..116d81f1a8 100644 --- a/deu/30/01.md +++ b/deu/30/01.md @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ This is an idiom. Alternate translation: "remember them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/ "while you are living in the other nations" -# has driven you +# has banished you "has forced you to go" diff --git a/deu/31/21.md b/deu/31/21.md index 04ad04a4bb..34193b5730 100644 --- a/deu/31/21.md +++ b/deu/31/21.md @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ The idiom "forget it from the mouth" means to stop speaking about it. Alternate What people plan to do is spoken of as if it were a physical object. Alternate translation: "what they plan to do" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]]) -# the land that I promised +# the land that I swore to them God's promise of the land was to give it to the people of Israel. This can be stated clearly. Alternate translation: "the land that I promised I would give to them" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]]) diff --git a/deu/32/06.md b/deu/32/06.md index 8a562d6feb..2b7e865810 100644 --- a/deu/32/06.md +++ b/deu/32/06.md @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ Moses uses a question to scold the people. Alternate translation: "You should give Yahweh proper praise ... people." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-rquestion]]) -# you foolish and senseless people +# you foolish and unwise people -The words "foolish" and "senseless" mean the same thing and emphasize how foolish the people are for disobeying Yahweh. Alternate translation: "you extremely foolish people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-doublet]]) +The words "foolish" and "unwise" mean the same thing and emphasize how foolish the people are for disobeying Yahweh. Alternate translation: "you extremely foolish people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-doublet]]) # your Father ... has created you ... made you and established you diff --git a/deu/32/07.md b/deu/32/07.md index 7472d1782e..e8f3523131 100644 --- a/deu/32/07.md +++ b/deu/32/07.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # General Information: -Moses speaks a poetic song to the people of Israel. +Moses speaks a poetic song to the people of Israel. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/writing-poetry]]) # Call to mind ... think about ... your father ... show you ... your elders ... tell you @@ -10,14 +10,14 @@ Moses speaks to the Israelites as if they were one man, so the words "you" and " This is an idiom. Alternate translation: "Remember" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]]) +# days of ancient times ... years of generations past + +Moses wants the people of Israel to focus on their history as a nation. + # days of ancient times "days of long ago." Moses refers to the time period when the ancestors of the people of Israel were alive. -# think about the years of many ages past - -This is a repetition of what Moses just said in the previous portion. Moses wants the people of Israel to focus on their history as a nation. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-parallelism]]) - # he will show you "he will make it clear to you" or "he will enable you to understand it" diff --git a/deu/32/08.md b/deu/32/08.md index 74a7e497c3..2937fe06cf 100644 --- a/deu/32/08.md +++ b/deu/32/08.md @@ -2,7 +2,11 @@ This is an idiom. "put the nations in the places where they would live." Similar words, "giving to you as an inheritance," appear in [Deuteronomy 4:21](../04/21.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]]) -# he set the boundaries of the peoples, as he also fixed the number of their gods +# according to the number of the children of Israel -God assigned each people group, together with its gods, to its own territory. In this way, he limited the influence of a people group's idols. +God has arranged the nations according to the way they relate to Israel. + +# the number of the children of Israel + +How this relates to "the boundaries of the people" is not clear. Some ancient and modern translations read, "the number of the angels of God" or "the number of the children of God." That is, God assigned an angel to each other nation, but he rules Israel directly. diff --git a/deu/32/31.md b/deu/32/31.md index a807364a75..a94333a8b4 100644 --- a/deu/32/31.md +++ b/deu/32/31.md @@ -6,7 +6,11 @@ The enemies' idols and false gods are not powerful like Yahweh. -# just as even our enemies admit +# Rock, just as even our enemies have concluded -"not only do we say so, but our enemies say so also" +"Rock; not only do we say so, but our enemies say so also" + +# have concluded + +have made a judgment after looking at the facts diff --git a/deu/34/12.md b/deu/34/12.md index 195426db44..f5139b02b6 100644 --- a/deu/34/12.md +++ b/deu/34/12.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# in all the great +# in all the mighty -"who did all the great" +"who did all the mighty"